The love (flame as flameclaw olly as aldersong)

[Flamer Tamer]

Flameclaw saw the brown she-cat. Everytime he saw her he gets nervous. The brown pelt, white paws, green gleaming eyes. He was going to ask her on a walk tonight. Just say it. "No," he thought ,"later." He went to the freshkill pile. Picked out a nice juciy mouse. Walked over to Aldersong. Sat down beside the buetiful she-cat and said "Errr...do you want to go on a walk tonight."

That night came. He was walking an she was following. Thank Starclan he thought. The stars was gleaming in the sky. Like little eyes just staring at us. He found a spot to lay under and look at the stars. He layed down and was glad she did the same. "This reminds me of Windclan," he knew she was wondering what Windclan was so he continued. "It was my last clan I ranaway from. It was a good life there. I don't know why I left. Sometimes I feel like I made a mistake. Because of the war here. But I can't leave this clan in such a big time of need," he said remembering his old clan. The thought made him miss his clan way more. But I won't go back in a clan of need he thought.

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Aldersong

Aldersong looked at the sky as she followed Flameclaw. She couldn't think of why the tom had asked her to come with him out of camp. It was so strange, just the way he would look at her (sorry if I was power playing but I don't have muse.) all the time. It made her feel uncomfortable and a little happy too. She couldn't understand the feeling though, she was only 16 moons and still trying to figure her self out. where was the tom taking her anyway? Was he going to tell her that she was a bad warrior? She hoped not, for she couldn't take it! For her parents had just died like a moon ago, the only family she ever had.

"Hey Flameclaw? Where are we going?" She asked with concern. It wasn't until he sat down did she know. He started talking about a clan called Windclan that he used to live in. She had heard storys that the new leader Amberstar had lived in Windclan also. She wondered what it would be like there outside the mountains without war. "Flameclaw.. whats it like in Windclan? I.. I.. was born here.. as you know but... I want to know what it's like to be beyond the mountains." She paused and stared at Flameclaw for a long moment...

[Flamer Tamer]

They stared at each other. Then he looked at the stars. "Well," he started ,"it was peaceful still there were battles, hunger death. They differnce of here and there is that here there are alot more. Of death, hunger, and battles." he explained. They stared into each others eyes again. Flameclaw sent a quiet pray to Starclan. Then he walked of into the forest with Aldersong.

They walked through the forest quiet. You could hear owls, and every leaf you step on. He sniffed and smelled prey. "Im going hunting you can come with me if you want." (I know it's really short but in a hurry and i'm done)

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Aldersong

Beauty comes from those who wait...


Aldersong smiled as Flameclaw walked off to go hunting. She had this warm feeling for him, though she still didn't know what it was. They had know each other for a little more than a moon, since the time Amberstar had introduced him to the clan. Every since she had seen the ginger cat she had had that warm feeling for him. It was probably just the special friendship they had together, the special friendship she never felt with anyother cat before. The pretty she-cat shrugged the thought off and hurried after the younger tom. She wasn't going to be left behind with out him by her side so she followed him.

"Yes, I would love to come with you.." Aldersong said quickly as she padded beside the handsome cat. "I don't like being alone and I like.. like being with you!" Aldersong tried to smile but instead her cheeks blushed, it was embrassing now and it had sounded better in her head. She followed him silently until she thought of something to say. Aldersong pulled up infront of Flameclaw with confusion in her sweet face. "Flameclaw... before we start hunting... I need to tell you something..." She looked at him with a face that said please-dont-think-I'm weird. "Ever since we first met I.. I.. I felt this warm feeling toward you.. do you feel the same? I don't know what it means!" Aldersong scaned Flameclaw's face for a friendly expression.

[Flamer Tamer]

What did she just say he thought. So she felt the same way about him. "I… do feel the same about you Aldersong." Do I love her he asked himself. He stared into her eyes then smiled. The stared at each other for what seemed like a moon. And he'll never forget that moon. He feeling came back. "The feeling back," he

He smelt prey. He found a mouse near a tree. He crouched down. He pounced. He bit into the back of it's neck. He smelt Aldersong nearby. He turned and saw the buetiful she-cat. He smiled. He knew he'd like the cat as a little more than a friend. He thought again. No he liked her more. That feeling came back. It keeps on coming back. He liked to be around her. "Hey Aldersong how is the prey runnin. Wait have you ever thought you wanted to be more than friends?" What did I just say he thought.

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Aldersong

Beauty comes from those who wait.

Aldersong looked at Flameclaw with confusion. She had never thought of having a boyfriend or even a mate! Could this younger tom be the one? "I.. I.. haven't even thought of having a mate..." the she-cat confessed. "I always thought of myself as an apprentice still... not grown up enough to have one.. but maybe I could try dating.." She looked at the tom with hopefulness. "Maybe we.. could try out dating?" In the cat's mind she thought of how stupid she was being! dating? Who dated these days? Oh well... the she-cat wasn't ready to become mates with someone she had just started to have feelings for.

"Anyhow.. lets go hunting!" She said quickly before the tom could say anything. Hopefully he wouldn't think she was a dork and hate her. please Starclan.. please let this relationship continue!


finished.. uggg but short.

[Flamer Tamer]

Hunting already didn't we just become mates he thought. "Ok," he said. He tried to hide his emotions but all he can think is YES. "Thanks Starclan," he said to himself. As they walked it was silent. Now he will never want to leave Skyclan to go to Windclan. Because he is in love.

As they were walking he smelt something. Mouse. He found It near some roots. He crouched down and wiggled his hindquarters. He pounced and bit the back of it's neck. He looked up and saw Aldersong. "Hey," he said through clenched teeth. Should I say it he thought. Not now Flameclaw wait for the right momment. "So...," he couldn't find the right words, "Lets go back to camp," he said sharply. On the way there he found the spot where he explained Windclan. "I love this spot," he said. He sat down and looked at the stars. The stars seemed like the danced around him and Aldersong. I think this is a great momment he thought. " Aldersong I...I...love you," he said akwardly. He said it. And he felt great.

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Aldersong

Beauty comes from those who wait

Aldersong looked at Flameclaw in surprise. "You.. you love me?" She stammered. Shock hit the poor she-cat almost knocking her off her feet. But what really shocked her was that she was feeling the same way. "I... I.. don't know what to say.." I've never loved someone like this before! She thought to herself. What if this isn't love, just great friendship!? But something inside her told her that it was real. Very real and it would last a life time! "I.. I.. love you to Flameclaw!" She belted out the words and turned to stare into the cat's eyes. Who would believe that she would become mates with a cat that was two moons younger than her?

The small she-cat smiled to herself and padded over to lick Flameclaw's ear. "We will always be together, forever.. even when we leave to go to Starclan." She rapped her tail around Flameclaw and sat down to look at the stars. Aldersong could just picture her grandchildern playing with their kits while she and Flameclaw watched from Starclan. It would be great to finally love someone and to have someone to love me She thought dreamily. "Moons before I met you Flameclaw the thought of having a mate and kits had never crossed my mind. I thought I could never love a tom but now that I've met you Flameclaw... I can't ever live without you. You are the love of my life.. and if you die.. I will never love again.." Aldersong stared up into the tom's eyes and then very slowly fell asleep next to him.

Comment: Yea a 10 minute post
Muse level: good for Aldersong!
Character mood: happy and inlove
Rper mood: fair.. kinda liking Aldersong now.. XD

[Flamer Tamer]

He sat down and listen to Aldersong. When she was done she lied down next to him. And then he saw the faint rise and fall of her chest. He layed down next to her. " Same to you Aldersong," he said to the sleepful (don't know if it is a word) body. He started to fall into a deep sleep. He was in a dream in saw the tree's shawdow they looked creepy. He walked deeper into the weird woods. He scented something. He walked towards the unfilmair scent. He smelt it even stronger as he walked closer. What is that he thought. Heard a rustle of leaves behind. He woke with a start. It was sunhigh. He sat up and sterched. He yawned, "Aldersong, it's time to go to camp." She sat up and streched. As they walked he didn't seem to hear anything.

As they walked through camp entrance. They rubbed each others pelt. "Ill get us a piece of prey," he said. He walked toward the fresh-killpile and found the biggest mouse in the pile. He walked back to Aldersong. "Here we go," he said. He stared into the buetiful she-cat's eyes. He sat down and started sharing the mouse with his mate. When he was donehe found out that Aldersong was eating a little more quickly than normal.(srry for powerplaying no muse) It can't be he thought. No it's not I hope he thought. I should just ask he thought. " Uhh... Aldersong are you... are you... having kits." "I hope not," he thought, "to early.

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OCC:

and thats ok if you powerplay just this once! just try not to do it again!

IC:

Aldersong

Beauty comes from those who wait..

Aldersong looked up at Flameclaw with surprise. "Well... I can't be pregant yet.. we will know in a moon or so. And I sure hope we don't. Skyclan can't afford to lose another warrior to having kits. What if I died in giving birth. Then Skyclan would only have one regular warrior who is only 14 moons old!" She paused and licked him. "I PROMISE, I will survive even if we have kits, it runs in my genes. My mother became a warrior right after giving birth to me, of course she came back and fed me every night but.. I'll be alive and well!" She smiled at her new mate, he was so supportive and kind. How could she even have thought of not having a mate? It seemed like even if she tried to devorice Flameclaw, she surely couldn't... he was her life now and she loved him with all her heart.

"So... how long have you been in Skyclan? When did you come into my clan?" Aldersong questioned. She wanted to know how long they had known each other, how long she had spent with him in camp.. not knowing that she loved him so greatly. Alot of time wasted! She thought to herself. "maybe a couple of moons? But that doesn't matter... as long as we know we love each other now!" She purred and continued eating her piece of fresh kill. She started to think about what it would be like having kits. It must be pretty hard, especially giving birth.. She thought. I wonder if I am really pregant! What if I really do die?! What if there really is no starclan and I die in the flames of the dark forest?! Aldersong's eyes widened and she felt sick. Oh Starclan don't let me die! She said to herself, almost saying out loud like a mewing pitiful kit. "Come on Flameclaw lets go away from camp again.. I feel.. I feel.. crowded..."

[Flamer Tamer]

He felt so relieved. He knew he was not ready to handle kits. He got off the ground and streched.He didn't feel tired but he yawned. "Im going to bed," he told to Aldersong. As he walked away he started thinking if Aldersong have felt the same as he did about kits. He stood like a statue for a seconed. He was day dreaming. He saw a brown kit run up to him and said, " I love you daddy." somthing touched his shoulder. It was Aldersong. "Im alright," he said with the day dream fresh on his memory. Confused he told Aldersong about the day dream. He didn't know what it meant but it might be importtant. He didn't tell Aldersong what he thought. He couldn't keep stuff away from her like that, but he had to just so she doesn't think I needto go to med cat. He stood and said bye, he needed be alone.

He walked out the camp entrance. he walked out with that day dream flooded his thoughts. He could hear nothing but himself talking to himself. "Agghh, does that day dream mean somthing," he told himself. He wanted to yowl but he knew if he did they would come looking for him. He wanted to be alone. He took a deep breath and it helped a bit. Clouds started to show in the air. He looked up he needed starclan now but the clouds. He growled. He wondered it made himself so angry. He stood and relaxed his muceles, took deep breaths, and cleared his mind. Finaly the thought of the day dream left his mind. He heard a rustle of leaves. He turned and sniffed. There was no scent of intruders. Just a skyclan warrior and blood. He went through the bushes and found the cat. "Nooo!" he yowled. He grabbed the cat by the scruff an dragged him. The cat was heavy but still breathing. Finely he got through the camp entrance. "Dusttail been attaked and is nearly dead!" he yowled with fear in voice. Don't die Dusttail. Don't die he thought. (wow I think this was my best post yet my words was flowing like water also olive if it was hard to post to this I'm srry I wanted to kill off dusttail in this post I'm srry dusttail)

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Aldersong

Beauty comes to those who wait...

Aldersong looked up startled as she saw the Skyclan Deputy bloody and almost dead. "Oh my Starclan!" She yowled. How could this happen? Who would do this? Why would they do this? There was only a couple of cats that would kill for no reason. "The tribe! They did this!!!" She hissed at Flameclaw. "We killed their leader and then they take revenge on us! When we should take revenge on them! THEY KILLED HALF OF SKYCLAN!! WHEN WILL THIS BLOODSHED END?!" Aldersong's normal soft tone hadn't shone up but instead a enraged warrior had.

Oh starclan.. Starclan... why have you done this? Aldersong though as she looked down at the warrior. He was one of us.. he deserved to live.. A tear rolled down the sad warrior's face. Now there was only three well warriors in camp. That is if.. Dusttail wasn't dead already. "Flameclaw.." Aldersong said softly, looking at her new mate with concern. "We must figure out if the poor deputy is dead.. we must.." The small brown warrior kept her eyes on the deputy as she talked. "Flameclaw.. please go back to camp and tell Amberstar that his deputy is in cridical condition... I will bring his body back to camp.. don't expect him to live.. it isn't expected."

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Aldersong padded away from the spot where she and Flameclaw had been minutes before. Dusttail hung by her jaws like a piece prey. The former deputy was dead, very dead. Probably had been dead after the first blow of the killer. "You poor poor cat!" The warriorious said sadly as she padded back toward camp. "Who will be picked to replace you? Flameclaw will be so sad.. so sad..."

[Flamer Tamer]

"What do you mean it isn't exspected!" he said. "Sorry," he said. He walked away to the camp. Why Dusttail, why him. His eyes narrowed. That dang tribe. If they want to die pick everyone of my friends off he thought. He walked through the camp entrance. "Dusttail needs help he probley is dead right now, but he needs help Aldersong is bringing him through the entrance soon," he said. It was hard to talk about Dusttail like that. "I found his body with fresh blood but no scent or footprints," he said the rest with anger in his voice, "it was the Tribe." No one seemed surprised.

He saw Dusttail. It was lifeless now when he found him he was nearly breathing. He never felt anger like this. His claws unsheated. Out of no where he felt sad. He said under his breath, "I can't wait until the next attack." He sat up right beside his body. He had to go to bed. His bestfriend and skyclan's duepty died today. He sat on top of his moss. Before he closed his eyes he said something, " Dusttail, I will have your revenge."

The dream he had that night was dark but clear. He was in the forest but for some urgent reason he could not remmember why. He looked down and was surprised he paws were brown. Looked back and saw that his body was brown. He was dusttail in this dream. As he walked into the dark forest he heard a rustle and turned. A cat with beady red eyes walked from the bush. The cat said, "What are you doing on out territtory." He replied, "To kill as many of y'all before I die." The red eyed cat said "Well my name Is Dirk I'll be the last person you'll see." He said, "We'll see about that." He woke with a start. So it was a red eyed cat named Dirk. You be ready Dirk I'll be the last person you'll see. Then finely he went to sleep with a clear mind.

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ok.. I think.. that's the end of that thread!